Beyond The Red Death Mask, Comic Project

Hello guys and ladies, this is a project based on Edgar Allan Poe's work, "The mask of red death".
In this pages, I intend to make something different, so I decided to use unusual things as divisories from the pages.
This is a part of a project, if I'll have some lucky, it will be part of a comics content.
Critics, ideas, opinions, your comments are welcome!
I expect you appreciate it!
'Til next time!

Click here to see on Deviantart:
https://rafaelskywalker.deviantart.com/art/Beyond-The-Red-Death-Mask-HQ-Page-1-699177501?ga_submit_new=10%3A1502908285